OnewanJuan

I like the tension between the characters. It put me on the edge of my seat thinking about what was going to happen next. The story was written in a manner that was easy to follow for the readers.

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that's kind of her to say

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I love the interaction of your characters. It has a good start. Right off the bat, your MCs have awesome chemistry! Can't wait to read more!