Alex_Lindhe

Contrast-->match/combo or whatever.

The most disturbing image I've ever seen. Both human and animal ears and worst of all, the tail coming from the crotch.

Divinity*

I like somewhat where this is going, but there's some problems that needs adressing. First of all, the spelling. Spelling mistakes everywhere. Fix it or get an editor. Second, There's no scene changes anywhere, so it's pretty confusing when it jumps from different places and sometimes with the same POV which means that time has passed without notice. Third, impossible large amount of stuff like money. Like please... 14 million gold from a maester??? 21 thousand ships made in what? A year? 3 Years? It's hard to know because you skip that information. I don't believe that Olivia can make that many ships. Maybe take it back a notch, like at maximum 100 ships. And even then it's quite a lot.

What you on about??? 4.5 tons is closer to double what you just said. 2000kg is 2 tons. And that's closer to your 4400 pounds.