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Well its a pretty good story but way to much Politichs and way to lesss things about our main Charachter. It is in our main character's point of vive but everything is abiut his Grandfather and father. I know Orgin story is Importand as well as the devolpment, but this is, i dont know, its kinda pulled loong, to make the story loonger. So all in all, its a good story just way to many side Charachter details, or something like that.
I really like the storry the Charachter is great, till he turned into a stealing Rat(sorry for Language). It kinda dost match with the Noble and kinda nice but a little Daring Personality of Sean and it makes me sad. Also the devolpment between him and his Parents is first great but then there is the thing with the Philospher stone witch his Mom simply took away, even trouht it didnt belong to her and she had no right to do that. But i like the Background of him and the relation shipp he has with his Friends, he even is nice to some of the People he dosnt like. [img=recommend]
well than, that's explain it, please if you want to criticize other's, don't just write trash by it but, an idea to make the story better or an idea to improve myself, like you just did.because no one understand's the simple word, "trash",simple i don't know what you mean with that, so thank you.
not quite he was going to break them, later when he meets his father, then hes going to break them. I kind of forgotten to write that down there so....i do it later?
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