Nunya

so, from calling what is essentially master *first name* to mister *first name* and then you go and make her say HE can call HER by her last name? you do know that Kyoka IS her first name, yes?

less, commas, my, dude... you use them a lot, especially when you don't need 'em.

bringing the hated child to the park, uhuh lol. is this going to be a himiko x hitoshi story? are they both going to get super OP quirks, like, telekinesis for toshi and the already fully developed transform with quirks for himiko? cant really say that sounds good.

why does the mom keep calling her child by their own last name? do your parents also call you by your last name? are you hated or something?

mandalay, guy.

dude, you keep using commas when you don't need to... get yourself grammarly or something cuz it'll really help you on that department.

if bakugo isnt high risk then no one is.

Buckithy

oof, came back to read more of this after what, nearly a year? o.O I thought there would be a couple dozen more chapters available :( turns out there were only 9 :( MOOOOOAAAAR!!!

if anyone was paying anything back in dbz, it was her dad which just makes it worse lol