50points

fr stuck just when something good was bout to happen. whoever the author is, is a master of suspense.

I would like to start out by saying well done so far. some of the things the could use a bit of work: ensure abilities are named correctly (there has been a single instance of an ability given two different names), show character growth (so far the MC has shown no development, even if they don't change their mindset the MC could at least attempt to follow their overall goal), provid some descriptions (for the most part we know who these characters or locations are, but help us immerse ourselves not everyone will be aware of the actual story) . other than that the only complaint I have is there isn't enough story I keep reading as soon as it's released, but take your time it's great so far. overall I would recommend the story it's a bit slow but that is to be expected to allow growth and development while following a dedicated storyline.

bro there is no story at all. it's just . and the chapter is done. at least look before you try to bot someone.

it was only two days he started at night. meaning he used night 1 day 1 night 2 day 2 night 3 finished.

loved the mutated idea, very fresh nice change of pace.

oh very creative love the idea nit of being paste, but the application to be a trap with the barrier.

always makes me laugh how frequently people just sign without reading. There was a game in the past that gave a bogus joke terms and conditions then followed with a secondary page asking if we actually read it and then finally the real terms and conditions. I can only assume that at least 50,000 people signed that without reading it due to the game selling more than 100,000 copies.

writing quality no major errors not autocorrected by brain; slight contradicting statements regarding limitations prior to upgrading or quest completion, but nothing reality shattering. updating Stability left as a default as long as author doesn't drop. world background explained. characters are shown to develop through the story and are given brief descriptions for the most part. finally story development is slight on the slow side, but so far worth the build. MC is in an interesting situation (has a system that seems scared of MC, inabilty to leave his bound location, and a sim management) and I look forward to the continuation of the story. Overall I highly recommend this novel.

writing quality: lots of repeating paragraphs to add words to the chapter. Just when you think the chapter is over and the next has started you get repeated paragraphs from the last chapter. Story development: there was nothing really so far due to the majority of info being repeated. characters are not given real descriptions so far. updating is left at a 3 as a default for all stories I review unless the author is taking a break or stopped story. World background: is bland so far earth, no global location given, no city, no land marks we are shown red eyes in the distance, red sky, a broken building two blocks away, a skyscraper with gash on the side and that is all so fat. I highly recommend being rewrote due to repeating info. Overall currently I can not recommend this book.

holy repeat every 4 paragraphs it felt like please review this and fix it.