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oh man you had me worried for awhile thinking there would be issues through the entire book.
please review your work you keep using things like "lalaral" which is not a word in English as far as I am aware and it keeps breaking the flow of reading.
I'm sorry but where did he put his hand? I have seen this combination of letters with others like it a couple of times, but as far as I am aware that is not a word and has no meaning.
I will say it's not the worst story I have ever read, but it is not something to go out of your way and binge read either. Let's start with the good points: it is over 100 chapters of free content, it does have culture content, it does have a system, it does have kinks. What it does poorly: the culture content is all the same with just different names, the characters are given little to no details or personality, the system is hardly used due to Mc hypocritical personality, the kinks are not well played into and fall off at the side. Overall it's not the worst thing I have read, but it could use some work.
A bit close to home there sounds like my dad "left to get milk"
also my review is subject to change with the introduction of new story development, release times, and rewriting (if it occurs).
I hope author continues to work with this novel. I would like to see how it turns out.
Even though my rating is not very high I do enjoy this novel throughly. The reason behind my ratings will be explained following: World background- never actually established we can only guess as the reader it takes place in the real world with only four locations named two of which are schools and the final two being towns/cities, Updating Stability- actually falls under the category of being unable to be defined by a star rating due to being a new novel, Character Design- Currently few details are given about any character and character growth seems to be minimal currently (new novel), Story Development- There has been some degree of development however I feel there as also been a step backwards [in regards to the step backwards: Day two of the new school shows a side character having a showdown with the main character in the form of a question however it was established on day one that no other student besides the main character was able to answer the most difficult physics question on the previous test. This all comes together as a waste of time and needlessly added to fill space (if the author were to rework this as to having this class take part prior to the test answer review or state it as the other student was absent the issue would be solved. Overall it is not an actual major issue and easy to overlook)], Writing Quality-So far there have been no issues with name disassociation, or translation errors (as far as I am aware) meaning this novel is leagues above others.
the demon or the tragic background?
hahaha. I don't think you can make that statement while doing two things. Firstly getting defeated by a pomeranian multiple times. Secondly talking to a pomeranian. I mean it's the size of a shoe.