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the flowers will attract bees which can assist in pollination of other plants as well.

mud, cover your body in mud it is a natural odor naturalizer and it also repels bugs like the little blood suckers from biting.

Jackie Chan Adventures was great as a kid!

writing quality: not bad a couple of issues here and there, but overall better than most. Updating Stability : new novel give it some time. world background: never actually mentioned, but the reader can make vague guesses. story development: rather slow and somethings seem to appear out of nowhere. characters: little to no descriptions depicting themselves. Also development currently is unable to grade due to story being new. overall not a bad story or idea if you will. I do recommend giving it a read. We do need some clarification on Aoi age otherwise some content could lead novel into trouble.

when did she get her own room?

isn't that the same description given to Aoi's cat form?

her words simple as they were earnest caught me off guard.

I felt a pang in my chest for her innocence and her candor (candidness).

I believe you have a run on sentence here (not very good with English muluself). Her words hung in the air, fragile and uncertain (add period here as is a complete thought) then contine with I... or you could use some form of conjunction, but with the use of and here it comes out missing later on when needed as well

*tugging* might be the wrong word generally associated with a pulling motion; however, if already in a bridal style carry you would typically *lay* the other person down. You could also toss or drop if you were being more aggressive, but in this instance you are being gentle.