Brandon_Bradley

yes, bjt you're taking a LOT or liberties...and at least one of them would ensure that humans never existed. That's a BIG game changer, as your gods rely on humans for strength. But with Promethius dead, humans don't exist, since he created us according to the Greek myths. And Helios? How would humans know of him if the were created AFTER he was killed in the Titin war? That Altas reference is also in jeopardy. I don't mind taking liberties, but you're entire story doesn't make sense because you're going wild with your liberties.

I think it's more the gods giving Alex their blessing for helping them out, which results in him gains specific abilities from them...which isn't all that unusual on Greek mythology. The reason gods are seen as all powerful despite their very obvious flaws are because they can pretty much do whatever they want to mortals. They can freely change your mind, body, or abilities. They can turn you into any object and make you do whatever they want to via cursing. They can also grant you superhuman abilities. The greatest humans to ever exist were granted their fame because they were blessed by the gods according to Greek mythology. The strongest, smartest, and most skilled people were that way because they held the favor of the gods. Even the fall of Troy was possible because the gods allowed it to happen. Troy could have very easily beaten the Greek army had the gods been allowed to participate in the battle. The fact that they won was purely because the gods stayed out out the fight...well, apart from Apollo guiding Hector's arrow to hit Achilles' ankle and kill him, and Achilles' weapons and armor being made by Hephaestus. Other than that, the gods played no part whatsoever in the fight.

I thought Dionysis (The Greek God of wine) was the one that wore a purple toga. Hermes wore winged saddles and a winged helmet. Yes, he carried it staff, but it was one with 2 entertwining snakes, and I believe it was golden, not silver. Plus, The God of wine was also the God of hedonism, so he's the one that'd strike me as playful, not the one who literally runs errands for all the other gods. Also, Athena is one of three Virginia goddesses...she doesn't have children. The closest one get to being a child of Athena is by being a genius. When one displays significant mental capabilities, she gives them her blessing, but she doesn't have actual child through conventional means. But hey, it's your novel. If you're fine with literally everything about this being wrong from a mythological standpoint, then I have no choice but to accept that.

Is it bad that I'm hoping that they finally catch Fang? That way, he can use the power and resources of the most powerful individuals in the entire Black Paradise Sect to gain even more power. That way, he'll become stronger than Kong much faster, as well as acquire powerful benefactors to aid and protect him from those that wish to harm him and his women. I mean, at this point, there isn't much they can do, even if they find out who he really is...not when his strength is equal to that of a supreme elder's. By the time he leaves the sect, he'll be even stronger than the matriarch herself...probably as strong as his grandmother or even his grandfather. And his grandfather is one of the strongest cultivators in the entire world.

It's actually quite easy. Take a knife, make an incision on the upper left of the chest, reach right in, rip it out, and then shove it in his mouth. The hard part is doing it fast enough to finish before his body shuts down. After all I prefer my victim to know that I both ripped out his heart and shoved it in his mouth before he loses consciousness and dies. I want that to be the last thing he experiences before he kicks off. But if I'm feeling particularly sadistic, then I'll torture him with the suicide plant. It's great because it's non lethal, despite it being the worst pain in the world. ripping out a heart is great for making a statement, but it's a quick death. True torture takes time. So the suicide plant is definitely the way to go.

Oops. Seems I put this comment in the wrong section. Too bad I can't simply copy and paste it into the right one. Guess it has to stay where it's at for now.

While I do understand the opposition, I have to agree with the author on the fact that it was in fact not NTR. The mother had zero intention of stealing away his woman. The whole thing was a simple yet necessary test of her loyalty. The only time it's NTR is if the end goal is to take someone's partner for yourself. So, while there were some aspects that resemble NTR, it was in fact not NTR.

Yeah...I don't know about Tristan, but I'm more likely to decapitate some like that king than befriend them. Or maybe rip out their heart and feed it to them. And I'd die before letting someone like that marry someone I cared about...and I'd be sure to take them with me. So I don't think there's much of a shot at that arrogant king, Tristan, and the sister holding hands and singing kumbaya together while riding unicorns off into the sunset. More likely Tristan is going to brutally murder Callan the second he can and then put his head on a pike as a warning to everyone else. That's what I'd do anyways.

Yeah...Loki isn't the god of fire. He's the god of mischief. And while Anubis is a god of death, he isn't THE god of death. That would be Osiris. He's the Egyptian version of Hades and Hel. Anubis is actually a pretty minor death god, while Osiris is the head honcho...the ruler of the underworld.

Well nobody forced you to read it. You are the idiot that willingly read a comment that you claim was 'aids to read.' So if it clearly wasn't so bad after all. Jeez. Talking to you is like talking to a chimp. No. I apologize. A chimp would be capable of more intelligent conversation than you seem to be able to manage. You're more like a koala bear, which is probably the dumbest animal on the entire planet. Even single cell bacteria are more capable than a koala bear, which isn't able to recognize eucalyptus leaves as food unless it's attached to a eucalyptus tree. And they ONLY eay eucalyptus leaves, which are toxic. Sound smart to you? Because it doesn't to me. That means it's a perfect comparison to you.