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Peter_Murray

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2020-08-21 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray7mth
    Antwortet auf Rodr1goR

    I think that is Martian Manhunter's disguise on earth.

    "Wonder Woman and General Swanwick can wait. I'll find an opportunity to invite them."
    DC:Reborn as SHAZAM
    Filme · Webnovel_Addicted
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray7mth
    Kommentiert

    I would recommend using speech marks "..." to show when a person is talking. It should make it easier to read. Other than that, this is a very enjoyable fanfiction so far. Keep up the good work!

    Ch 5 Thor Faces Surtur 1
    Thor God Of Thunder
    Anime und Comics · luminous1_vanqu10
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray9mth
    Kommentiert

    No harem

    No
    Naruto: The Game is Pain
    Anime und Comics · Z_Kuro_Z
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray9mth
    Kommentiert

    "Wich" should be changed to "Which".

    So the mc has powers wich are inspired by the abilities of the MC of the game: shadow or war wich is a great game.
    A wraith in GOT
    TV · FrikandelSpeciaal
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray9mth
    Kommentiert

    I believe the bifrost was around in this time because Bor, Odin's father, used it in the war against the dark elves before they went into hiding. But I don't mind it not being around at this time.

    As of right now in the Timeline Asgard is not a city made of Uru and gold and has not created the Bifrost yet... As of right now, they don't have all the advanced technology that was seen in the Movie... Instead, they have spaceships for now instead of the Bifrost.
    Reborn as the younger Twin Sister of Hela in MCU! [Up for Adoption]
    Filme · Crimson1997
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray9mth
    Kommentiert

    "ruffle" should be "roughly" I think.

    The next day my father decided it was time for me to learn to hunt. Being woken up with the moon a little bit after it's high mark, ruffle 3 am. My brother had healed mostly so he was also awoken. Waking up my father said "Your old enough to learn to hunt, let's get a quick meal and go." We walked out of our partitioned room and ate a quick egg sandwich which was an egg, left over elk steak and bread. As walking out my mother said "Good luck and I will have your sister tell Floki you won't be by today."
    Hp The Ageless
    Bücher und Literatur · BigSteve
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray10mth
    Kommentiert

    Jean

    -Jean Grey
    Marvel: King of Winter
    Filme · Torhelm
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray10mth
    Verschickt

    Liking the story so far. Keep up the good work. 👍

    Forces of Fate – A Star Wars Story
    Filme · Avon_Crab
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray11mth
    Kommentiert

    1

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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray11mth
    Kommentiert

    no harem

    Harem or No?
    Marvel: King of Winter
    Filme · Torhelm
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray1yr
    Kommentiert

    +1

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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray1yr
    Verschickt

    It is an interesting concept so far and has a good pacing with not developing too fast or too slowly. I don't like the fact that there could be more than 1 lover but there have not been enough chapters to actually tell if it is going to happen. Other than that it is all good for me.

    Becoming King of the Wildling's in GOT
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray1yr
    Kommentiert

    I like the choice. People always underestimate humans for some reason.

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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray1yr
    Antwortet auf Scathach_

    you put down "after they say his" when you should have said "after they saw his" basically change the "say" into a "saw".

    He went to learn medical ninjutsu at the hospital at first they chased him away but after they say his talent in the medical field he was welcome to learn from them.
    Naruto and his system
    Anime und Comics · Scathach_
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray1yr
    Kommentiert

    Forcing people to use the app. It is fine for mobile users but people who use pc cannot use the online version and they cannot download the app onto their pc.

    Ch 8 Not a chapter - What's happening?
    HP: Magic of the End
    Bücher und Literatur · Simple_Russian_Boi
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray1yr
    Kommentiert

    No harem please.

    Ch 13 Decision on Love Interest (FL)
    HP: The Arcane Thief
    Bücher und Literatur · Snollygoster
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray1yr
    Kommentiert

    When someone speaks, could you make it clearer as to who is speaking for example: Person1 said "hello" and Person2 said "hello" back. Or you could use a format like this: Person1: hello Person2: hello It would make reading this a lot easier. This is just a suggestion, you do not have to do it if you want.

    Ch 1 stationary
    Spinning as Naruto
    Anime und Comics · Lor_D_Twigo
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray2yr
    Kommentiert

    Get well soon.

    Ch 14 (MAJOR NOTICE)
    Reincarnated in Naruto with Steel Release (On Hold)
    Anime und Comics · just_s0merand0m9uy
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray2yr
    Kommentiert

    I say finish this because I have read it this far and it would be a shame to not finish it.

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    Werewolf Lord through the multiverse
    Anime und Comics · Bjorntjuh96
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  • Peter_Murray
    Peter_Murray2yr
    Kommentiert

    Go for Luna. Could make him take the philosopher's stone to get Luna immortal.

    Ch 8 Bloody Business and Occulumency
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    Bücher und Literatur · NorthernLights_
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