The book is nice not great because I read romance mostly so a personal opinion don't come after me for that lol. The flow is nice . Background perfectly gives the feels of ancient times . Maybe it's supposed to . Who knows ? Kek . Lucifer and old man really are great and I know lucifer shall be hot so to the author. There are three things I don't like First - because I really don't like you for throwing lucifer in the prison Second - I really don't like that Third - I really really don't like you for that Don't take my words too seriously . Don't come after me as I am joking around . The story is really nice give it a try I am sure you guys won't regret it and I am sure the author updates regularly instead of slacking off.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I like the way it's written and the thinking is amazing. Some places need focus but that's not a major deal. Will be waiting for updates since I like the plot .it's a nice fanfic though .[img=recommend]

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

It's a nice novel. I only read the first chapter though the writing is good adding this to my library will be waiting for updates [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I'll try thinking of good chapter names .I remember I had to do that earlier but I forgot .Give me some time I'll do it .have a good day🙃

To be honest it's great everything is just perfect. I love it. The imagination here is really great. And while reading I can feel each scene happening in front of me. I am really blown away. Not really into these types of novels but this novel has grabbed my attention for sure.

Good story . Way of writing is nice. Flow is good. I suggest a bit of cliffhangers would be nice. I mean if you could make it a bit less obvious. That's all overall I like it. It's a nice one.

I love the start of the novel. It has a pretty nice pace and fluidity. I am didn't get well along with the first chapter but after that it's awesome . Keep going your writing style is nice too.

Hmm maybe it's because I just posted it an hour ago but I'll ask someone about it and yeah I disappeared for a whole month lol

Hey I won't call you rude. Thanks for pointing out my mistakes I'll definitely work on them 🙂

How is it my fault???