LENX

i found the interaction between the characters very awkward and cringe adding to that the intolerable mc and the gender bended characters its very bad

i think this is better

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unreadable .........................................

why ?

the only saving grace for this novel is its somewhat ok grammar and writing quality , other than that every other aspect is either terribly bad or agonizingly boring and cliche this novel is closer to a Chinese xianxia than a dxd fanfic where you have the mc hoing on pointless side quests in order to gain power only to come out weaker than he was , not to mention the mc is a 6 y/o child for most of it . overall it was a huge waste of time .

very bad , borderline unreadable ......

very bad and cringe, .........................