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you'll have to speed up a bit or drop bunch of chapters at once so readers can see that your novel is actually different than the original. I got no problem if youre making an original of something you like shoot maybe itll be better but right now it feels like an unoriginal rip off due to the name and feel.
it's good the main character is extremely overpowered and always seems to get the right loot drop to have another ace up his sleeve. it's got alot of cliches and you'll read the line "like the difference between heaven and earth" like ten times a chapter but its a fun read. I hate that im all caught up now reading one chapter every day kinda sucks lol. I recommend it's not believable and the mc isn't just good he's impossibly lucky plus he always has an extra move when all his lost he just is like oh I also have a dragon boom and everyone is shook it happens over and over. I do wish he was pressured a bit more and maybe took a loss or two but they'd probably ruin the novelty of it.
hey are you using Richie on purpose or are you misspelling lich constantly?
the book is decent and some characters are fun but the chapters are pretty short and seem to leave intentional cliffhangers every time I get needing suspense but a cliffhanger at the end of every release is tedious. all in all its got some good and some bad but it can be a bit of a money pit due to nothing happening or fights that intentionally get cut off at the end of any chapter.