I'm working on my first book and I want everyone to feel free to tell me if i could something better or improve i want feedback so I can try to improve myself in writing books
2020-08-15 BeigetretenGlobal
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overall I really enjoyed reading the story I think you did a great job divolping (sorry if I spelled that wrong 😅 ) but I really like the main character personally