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shouldn't count the first chapters as the first chapter you gave an introduction and started the first actual chapter as another intro you explained it all we have 3 chapters of fillers for no reason
so everything has been decent but to say sun level power is stronger then star level sounds stupid since stars are suns and if you have the powers of stars to me means you should be able to travel between them where sun should mean ya can only travel in the solar system
first 4 chapters all about the authors life ..... really cool don't waste 4 chapters talking about it just wait until your ready to write then write the rest is un needed
good job webnovel keep repeating stories in the trial reads since thats what everyone wants....... not get ya act together been on here 6yrs and you have gotten progressivly worse