mavis356

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Saying this is pretty rude to other readers. I’m also not good with english and even I can see the grammar mistakes but, imo, it’s getting better and the story itself is good when you look at the rest of the stories. It’s rare to find a famale MC and she is certainly an interesting character. The plot is still following the cannon but unlike most of the MC’s out there (the ones that doesn’t do much to change anything) this one makes changes that feels alive Grammar can fixed if the author gets better or find someone to help but i think the story is more important and this one is better than most

‘White Demon’ De Luna sounds good for the new epithet 👍👌

me: fluffy moment! 😍 Luna: shish kebab 😑😑😑😑 I was about to throw away my phone lol 🤣

she had to say ‘Up!’

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I can totally imagine luna asks signature from naruto 🤣

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon