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TheTrueScientist

TheTrueScientist

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pretty much an amateur writer.

2020-08-04 BeigetretenUnited States
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  • TheTrueScientist
    TheTrueScientist2yr
    Verschickt

    Come and give this book a review! I need 10 for a general rating. My later chapters are where it's at in terms of quality, but I will be improving my earlier chapters to optimize the reading experience!

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    AX-1
    sci-fi · TheTrueScientist
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  • TheTrueScientist
    TheTrueScientist3yr
    Antwortet auf Rouges

    :3

    Ch 12 CHAPTER 12: Dust and Guns
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    sci-fi · TheTrueScientist
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  • TheTrueScientist
    TheTrueScientist3yr
    Kommentiert

    Yo, can I help you refine and edit some of these chapters? Contact me on discord if yes.

    Year 3065, after billions of years , the planet earth of milky way galaxy finally dried out of its life essence. People of the world decided to make their way to another planet for a new life.
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    World Quest
    Fantasie · dionescuyn
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  • TheTrueScientist
    TheTrueScientist3yr
    Antwortet auf fswmoq80

    As a small-time writer, i am often disappointed when Seeing these advertisements. I know the reviews are essential for a story with less thAn 10, but it just hurts my pride...

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    The Neuroalchemist
    sci-fi · TheRabbitHole
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  • TheTrueScientist
    TheTrueScientist3yr
    Antwortet auf DaoistFNtuCc

    noice

    Ch 1 CHAPTER 1: The Beginning
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    sci-fi · TheTrueScientist
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  • TheTrueScientist
    TheTrueScientist3yr
    Kommentiert

    I feel like your writing style would be better in past-tense

    Chapter 1
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    The Last Celestial
    sci-fi · Atlas_Grey
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  • TheTrueScientist
    TheTrueScientist3yr
    Kommentiert

    Instead of leaving your side note directly inside your book, you can use the author's note that appears at the end of your chapter when in editing mode. just an FYI

    (might have a slow start, idk, but it picks up, I promise let me know what you think, please)
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    Atlas Grey
    sci-fi · Atlas_Grey
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  • TheTrueScientist
    TheTrueScientist3yr
    Kommentiert

    and thus begins the exposition dump

    Eight Hundred Years Later
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    God Emperor
    Ost · Flying fish
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