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Zoro_The_Dark

Zoro_The_Dark

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I write novels. I'm the author of the fantasy work 'HEAVENS SLAYER' Please read it!

2020-08-02 BeigetretenIndia
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark2yr
    Kommentiert

    Hello sir this is me Akarsh Tripathi

    Ch 1 Keyboard Glitch
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    Totally Mid Slash Sheet Storytelling
    Fantasie · Kiltarina_Sovaltos
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark2yr
    Antwortet auf Mini_Cabbages

    Sure 😊👍

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    I dont care being imperfect
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Verschickt

    This book is really really amazing! The MC is really amazing with his thoughts, he is imperfect as he suffers with various disorders like dyslexia and else (so comes the name of the book) but his personality is straight up badass. Writing quality of this book is clearly comedic and the plot is very original. Trust me everyone, just read it to the third chap and you'll start loving this book!

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    I dont care being imperfect
    Urban · sweet_wine
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Kommentiert

    This is awesome!

    Ch 3 03 Friend indeed!
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    I dont care being imperfect
    Urban · sweet_wine
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Kommentiert

    Bruh the MC's body is kinda messed up 😭😭

    She ran near to me and shook her head saying yes. We walked our way to the bus stop spending time together. The thing is that she kinda like seems to be making fun of me all the time. I feel like she is stammering her words on purpose ( yeah I'm like a little pile of laundry, I got a hand full of disorders like bipolar, MDD, and minor dyslexia. Hehe I'm a big mess). It kinda like rages me most of the time.
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    I dont care being imperfect
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Kommentiert

    Lol i like the mc

    Ch 2 02 Never expected it
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    I dont care being imperfect
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Kommentiert

    Ooh nice beginning

    Ch 1 01 First shot
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    I dont care being imperfect
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Antwortet auf Luca_Stark

    😂😭

    -Son, from today onwards you aren't part of our family anymore, garbage, we hope you'll die, beep!"The call ended.
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    Hate System
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Verschickt

    A really well placed book with brilliantly sketched out characters that are a part of a fantasy world with level system and other magical elements. This novel will definitely reach a high stature, once you start updating more chapters that is. Everything else including the writing quality is really awesome, just a lil bit of typos but you can understand the story in a vivid way. Best of luck!

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    The Seven Calamities
    Fantasie · Nikola_Niko
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Antwortet auf PIG30N

    Yes! But he will be around chapter 110+

    "Well you could say that! So are you here to become a slayer too? If yes then we could form a party with that miss over there." He pointed his finger towards a Lady who was wearing a red Armor which looked thin but was built with MEGALITHIUM. It was a metal which was discovered from the demon's world. It was thin but it was so hard that even if someone used all of his force attacking it with a hammer, it would have no effect.
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    HEAVENS SLAYER
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Kommentiert

    Hello everyone! The second generation of heavens slayer is over now! It was a long journey where many people died. But, at the end, Alcesto and friends achieved victory! Now, what is lying for the massive plot which will start from next chapter?! The third generation will be of more than 120 chapters! Each with 1.5k words! Stay tuned!

    Ch 85 CHAPTER - 85 - BATTLE FINALIZED
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    HEAVENS SLAYER
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Kommentiert

    Hmmm this chapter had some good comedy. And, all of the words 'than' should be replaced with 'then'. There might be a few mistakes in the early chapters but you'll become a pro once you develop a habit of writing. Best of luck! I'm stuck with this novel 🥳

    Ch 2 Level 7
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    The Seven Calamities
    Fantasie · Nikola_Niko
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Kommentiert

    I would like to suggest you to change the paragraph whenever two different characters are talking. Change the paragraph at (...robot.") Some people may get confused of the current way. This will be much better. 😁👌

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    The Seven Calamities
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Kommentiert

    🤣

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    The Seven Calamities
    Fantasie · Nikola_Niko
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Kommentiert

    Lemon flavoured juice 😝

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    The Seven Calamities
    Fantasie · Nikola_Niko
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Kommentiert

    *then* a juice will do...

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    The Seven Calamities
    Fantasie · Nikola_Niko
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Kommentiert

    😂

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    The Seven Calamities
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Antwortet auf Nikola_Niko

    Lol, the first 20 chapters are just a prologue 😉

    CHAPTER - 3 - THE GODS
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    HEAVENS SLAYER
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Antwortet auf Nikola_Niko

    Nope ,I loke the rich big shot with attitude 😎😎

    Ch 1 'Helkep'
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    The Seven Calamities
    Fantasie · Nikola_Niko
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  • Zoro_The_Dark
    Zoro_The_Dark3yr
    Antwortet auf Nikola_Niko

    Oof, never realized the typo 💀

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    HEAVENS SLAYER
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