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ReviewerAndy1yrKommentierthide it and be nonchalant
Q.8) Do you want Harry to hide his abilities or reclaim his rightful title as the Prince of Enchantments?- ReviewerAndy1yrKommentiert
What a waste of potential for a story.
"That's my duty as your father" - ReviewerAndy2yrKommentiert
Why is a person with a personal bias being a judge for new adventurers? What a dumb plot.
"Umm... Morpheus, she has a backstory with young children being adventurers. She can't see young adventurers going on dangerous missions. She did it out of her goodwill, can you ask your companion to forgive her?" Robin asks with pleading eyes. - ReviewerAndy2yrKommentiert
I drop here.
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - ReviewerAndy2yrAntwortet auf BillyRage
trueeee, depsite being 12 youd think he would be more mature living in the slums, raising a child and supporting them. Stuff like that would make anyone more mature and smart, but nooo.
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - ReviewerAndy2yrKommentiert
If careful is selling all the pills u stole in one place at one time then no ur not being careful.
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - ReviewerAndy2yrKommentiert
And this is where I drop. Just garbage character writing and plot that is super forced and unrealistic.
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - ReviewerAndy2yrKommentiert
This is actually garbage character writing.
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - ReviewerAndy2yrVerschickt
Another example of a cliche approach to characters in another universe, especially ones like DC or Marvel. There is no human attributes, no human quality and no actual human thought to the approach. You develop zero background for the character and make them a blank slate, which isn't great for the reader. The quality of grammar is decent, as seen instantly in the synopsis, however, you can really improve in how you describe the action taking place. Show us what is happening, rather than telling us.
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Author, you're doing a great job at breaking immersion and readability.
"A familiar face, I've seen her somewhere… Precisely! She was in the anime! This is the owner's daughter! In person, she is so beautiful! Drag her into the harem" - ReviewerAndy2yrAntwortet auf Negi95
Probably not. They're using " instead of ' for inner thoughts. Silly Author.
"I know this story better than you, woman!" - ReviewerAndy2yrKommentiert
sigh
According to his feelings, it took about 20 minutes before he calmed down. Now, there was only one question left in his mind: Why in Boruto! - ReviewerAndy2yrAntwortet auf Venerable_Adam
cringe
"Hmm, if I didn't know I would directly ask for the Sentry serum but I for one don't want to be in a constant fight with a universe destroying being inside me every time I use my powers. Also, I have no plans for fighting with universe destroying entities if there is any. I'll leave that to the original recipients. Hmm, what to ask. A devil-fruit ability or a quirk or become a kryptonian. So many choices." I thought. - ReviewerAndy2yrKommentiert
yeah, I definitely know what impact 2000kg of TNT does.
He punched Yuujiro with all his strength, and the wind pressure created by this punch was alone enough to cause damage equal to 2000 K.G. of T.N.T. - ReviewerAndy2yrKommentiert
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