Chewys

Hey guys, sorry for the late post, I've been kinda busy lately. Because for me, school is starting and I have a lot of things to do. I won't guarantee that I'll post next Saturday, but I'll try my best.

Hey, I'm back. This is only the prologue of the story, and I'm completely rewriting the entire story. (Most of the plot point and character won't change, most of the changes are more scenes and better character development). If you have any questions, you can ask me.

After this chapter, I will be taking a month break from posting since I'm a bit burnt out. But during my break, I will be rethinking some of the plot point, plot holes, and just general flaws in my story. When I started writing this novel, I don't know what I'm doing, I just used general story writing knowledge to my advantage. After reading some of yours criticism, I have more experience in novel writing and character designs. So in the future, I will rewrite all the older chapters and make them better. And for all of the newer chapter, I will try my best to learn from my mistakes. Have a great day! :)

It's a unique story with a unique concept, definitely something worth reading. Also there's some funny lines in the novel when out of context like. "GET YOUR HANDS OFF MY BUTTS."

Thanks!

wow, you read fast, Alex is a weirdo to me tho in my opinion

Thanks! But I don't understand why you like Alex tho. He's a weird fella.

Interesting story, This story has a lot of potentials, The first chapter give me a lot of 2020 vibes, with all the flu and stuff. Definitely a good story!

The story plot is definitely interesting, it's giving me a lot of Phoenix wright ace attorney vibes, since they're very similar. The only thing that needs some work is the grammar. Everything else is perfect.

The story is pretty good and an Interesting concept, but damn its been long since Human and Vampire decided a peace tribute. The only thing that's need to be worked on is the Grammar. :P Overall a good story