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Whoa! Now that's something to wait for! UwU
it's alright just stay safe....💪😤🕶️🤏
I won't say it's the best work I've come across, author is new to writing is what I believe. also the writing style changes quite a lot in paid chapters so actually the start is different. pace is a bit inconsistent, the story sometimes is slow sometimes is fast, it lacks a but of character description in the beginning. Though he's learning and putting in changes as per comments so if you read, do point out mistakes or suggestions to him.Bbut I love the idea. now it's down to personal taste too. 👍
See this! I just gifted the story: Potion
The girls keep walking in!
Whoa! The writing just got stepped up by many levels! This is a nice change! And I'm seeing more stuff in this ver.
The writing style is a pretty easy man! It's so great to read something simple yet intuitive 😎😎 The character buildup is not so fast yet it doesn't seem so fast at the same time. Keep up, dear! 🥰🥰
Yeah Sure! You don't need to ask such things! By the way, congratulations will need to wait a bit I guess! Any spoiler