DragonPhoenix

He is only 15 right now let the dude grow up and learn his way around the world. Romance and his values will slowly be developed.

Thanks! Been working on my writing, it should keep getting better as you read on. Of course by small margins.

Yes, I am thinking about this what do you have in mind?

The first 15 chapters are edited! Try reading it now and let me know how it goes.

The first 15 chapters are edited! Try reading it now and let me know how it goes.

Yeah, I stopped using that in the later chapters.

I noticed it and stopped doing that, will edit the previous chapters soon!

Yes, I noticed this and I stop it in later chapters. I will go back and edit the previous chapters when I get some time.

When someone shows kindness to you, you show kindness to others!

Keep up the good work. Looks like it has a lot of potentials. You don't come across good stories and good writing often.