Thumbiko_Mkhala

i hate that he revealed that he is from another world casually like that to two strangers that he knew nothing about... that's stupid

i will stop. I know i won't like the rest i hate this kind of stories where they reveal things like reincarnation or that you are from another world...this kind of things need to be tightly kept secrets that you keep from anyone and everyone

the whole chapter and we still don't know much about the other guys and even no historical background of who Elizabeth is...and no wise investor puts all his eggs in one basket even if you are sure bcz a small change can cause a butterfly effect leading to massive losses

why are you writing as if we know these guys already? and you could have also mentioned how much time has gone since winning the lottery

poorly written..the interaction are shitty all in all it's just really bad

it's average..the moment I read the first page it was average...the intro wasn't good at all..

there reaction is absurd...at this time the war is still ongoing... they should immediately know that only Voldemort would want to kill someone and also make regulus that scared...the author didn't really think it through properly when writing this segment... it makes the characters seem stupid which they aren't...anyways goodbye

it was good at the beginning but it went downhill in just 2 chapters ..the mc became shitty and whole putting DC things was just another shitty thing

so this entire chapter no mention whatsoever about the cause of his death his parents and rest..like I have questions who massacred them and why??🤨🤨🤨🧐🧐🧐🧐😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨🫤

then what is he apart from a simp... he is getting involved in her business,, the guy even tells her about his reincarnation and system just because she wants to know why he is helping her.... that is 200% a simp...fuck this shit am out