Dao_of_Melancholy

Have him and his family (if not all at least his loved ones) able to be reborn into descendants

I’d say for good authors it’s usually to use them as narrative whetstones to develop their main characters either learning lessons with them as mentors or as enemies to learn from in their battles.

Great story with a few minor errors. House Royace is house Royce. They are ‘descendants’ of the first men and a couple more. Great content with just a bit of fleshing out with grammar needed

Of? There are quite a few haha

I know the basics of it. Not sure how this will go as the webnovel is a very long one so unless he power levels abusing meta knowledge or smth it could be a long arc

I mean I’ve seen the concept before just usually with more build up (e.g.Quests that go against users morals and cause more problems than they solve). Hopefully it won’t be a full on nerf or he’ll create his own system or smth

So is the system is evil? Anyone got any thoughts on that?

That’s not me saying I hate the novel just me saying that this FL is not the type of… creature most would hope an MC to end up with as she has minimal redeeming qualities and shows little regret to what she has done to MC and it would take one HELL of a redemption arc for most people to like her as an FL

I think he is saying (hard to tell poor grammar and lack of commas) that MC should marry Shaera and that Rhaegar should be given Summerhall to rebuild (as a branch of house Targaryen)

Wait so his citizens from Skaggos and the free folk can gain SAO system that is an amazing boost!!!