The best story I've ever read in my damn life.Not only does it have a character that feels real and developed, it is incredible how there can be a story with this well-done background.Read this story you won't regret it.

Keep going

It is simply my point of view, I did not read all the chapters, because they are not even enjoyable, if you like reading this type of things, it is very much your taste. I recommend you read again friend, or simply read other people's fanfic and compare.

None of this makes sense, I don't understand the MC's behavior, nor his actions, none of it makes sense, it's just poorly crafted wish fulfillment.Read it for yourself.

Villain

I'll give it 5 stars, for the moment it's entertaining to read. I like this type of systems, the worlds they have traveled, in my opinion, give a fresh note, I look forward to more of this.

It's interesting, what can I say, I like Warhammer, there aren't that many fanfics of this one that I like, it's a very good read...for the moment, I expect more from this.

Is there something this man doesn't do right?Hahahahaha

My username is: TILIN INSANO

First

I don't know what to make of this, it's just too fast, I liked the idea of ​​the restaurant, it's interesting how it connects to other worlds, but it's just that. You can't enjoy it if you go so fast, what you could have implemented is to introduce the characters at a slow pace, not so fast, so that the MC knows them and interacts with them.

I agree with you, I think her personality is more in line with a female character. Overall, the story is entertaining.

a true masterpiece, out of so many fanfics found in webnovels, this is one of my favorites, it's just amazing . Pd:Read it you will not regret it.

friend, author, partner, why haven't you been able to update this great story? I need more chapters, I'll be patient and wait for your return.

it's good, the evil MCs are amazing and I like them better than the passive MCs.This story has potential, I look forward to where it will go.

10/10, I hope to be able to enjoy this novel more, I recommend it 100%..............................................................................................

uff something refreshing in my opinion, I hope more of this......................................................................................

i need moressssss

this chapter has been incredible, today literature won xD

I don't know how to start..... I just find the character's behavior very stupid, I mean his actions haven't been the most reasonable until now and I don't think they will be in the future.your writing is good, but the plot of this is rubbish.I don't understand how there can be people who can like this well everyone has their tastes