th0trepellent0120

I'm a bit late but wouldn't it be really dumb to stream in an online reliant future where a company can most likely find out about your piracy because you streamed it?

I was wondering what felt off, it's best to separate narration from characters thought/dialogue. The reason why it helps is because it creates consistency and sets a steady rhythm for the reader to follow.

become takkar the beastmaster

It feels like he is hiding behind the excuses of beauty to avoid these memories, he is trying to protect his heart with a mountain.

stop thinking

fight her, make the thot run away

Hello there...

it's missing a period