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roubando_universo6 days agoAntwortet auf Heavenmonarch_Lucas
- roubando_universo7 days agoKommentiert
damn the referee the thief
- roubando_universo7 days agoKommentiert
Hi, I read the story again.
- roubando_universo7 days agoKommentiert
you gave up on creating the story after all it's been a long time since you released the last chapter what a shame the extremely good story
- roubando_universo15 days agoVerschickt
The story is interesting, but at some points MC's IQ becomes negative, to be honest as a reader, this makes me very angry. I think that improving this will make the story very good.
- roubando_universo15 days agoKommentiert
It's just my opinion as the reader
- roubando_universo15 days agoKommentiert
the story is interesting and all but it continues like this I think it will end up with a low rating
- roubando_universo15 days agoKommentiert
the MC is quite intelligent but out of nowhere you reduce the MC's IQ to negative to make a meaningless plot
- roubando_universo15 days agoKommentiert
as you are writing the story you can't realize that some things you write don't make any sense
- roubando_universo15 days agoKommentiert
the important thing is he doesn't think about the consequences he just goes there and does it, you know, because of a useless plot, the story is going to be bad if you keep writing like this
