Joannnichole
I am a new writer and I also plan on getting my book out there. Please enjoy it.
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Joannnichole7dKommentiertwhy not do his fire one in exchange? I didnt even understand that in the manga
_Forget it, let’s not think about this. I should hurry up and sleep or else I’ll really pass out!_- Joannnichole13dKommentiert
I thought the blood sticking affect was. 8% all the time not .8% chance
John flicked the blood off his Bloodthirsty Blade, feeling a slight regret that the bloodsucking effect hadn't triggered this time. - Joannnichole14dKommentiert
if it's moon form it shouldn't be sun and heat and flames. since next paragraph has sun it should be sun form
Domain prototype, [Sun and Moon Domain], Moon Form~! - Joannnichole16dKommentiert
author please stop this tactic. I would rather wait for a proper chapter than this still if spacing and repeat words just to fill a quota of words and characters
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - Joannnichole16dKommentiert
great another space filler chapter where a little word possible is used and extra spacing is used to maximize payment
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - Joannnichole19dKommentiert
I thought this was the point of the skill. it can only if it don't require any specific body parts that she don't have
"What a great divine ability~! Sigh... Unfortunately, my [Mirror of the Moon] cannot copy any passive divine abilities." Tang Li Xue sighed in disappointment. - Joannnichole20dKommentiert
the emperor? this is funny
"Dear, Lucy. I'm sorry, I won't be able to go home. The emperor and his subordinates attack the underground secret military base and make us turn against each other. His demonic energy poisons everyone's minds and takes over them. I no longer know who my friend or foe is. The high official decided to cut us down and close this place's access in and out. We are trapped inside. If you find this letter someday, I just want to say that I love you so much. I will fight to the last drop of my blood to stop them." - Joannnichole24dKommentiert
gender changed?
"By the way, Commander," Abby said, lifting her gaze to meet John's. - Joannnichole24dKommentiert
repeats and unusual spaces. looks to me your doing the minimum needed to get money this chapter. having repeats is ok once in a while but proof read please a bit more and please don't use tricks. I enjoy your book I'll keep reading but I don't like tricks
Ch 846 Chapter 846: Questions About Ancient Mythical Bloodline! - Joannnichole29dKommentiert
it's a repeat
Even though they currently had three tons of black iron ore, it would only power the cannons for three shots... - Joannnichole1mthKommentiert
life steal is on this weapon or a skill he got
With this addition, the Bloodthirsty Blade would truly become an invincible weapon! - Joannnichole1mthKommentiert
he has life steal also or did you forget
John rubbed the Dragonblood Stone in his hand, deciding not to dwell on anything else. - Joannnichole1mthKommentiert
what happened with his sword
Allen and Larissa seized the moment, their eyes locked on the massive beast before them. As a team, they knew they had to act quickly and decisively. Allen charged forward, his demonic claws gleaming with dark energy. His movements were swift and calculated, aiming for the Minotaur's vulnerable spots. Larissa followed close behind, her crimson eyes ablaze with determination. - Joannnichole1mthKommentiert
the sword has life steal
With the skill's existence, he would never run out of MP, and converting a portion of his damage into HP would mean he could self-sustain! - Joannnichole1mthKommentiert
if cooked right I could
Even humans could eat cockroaches and mice when they were too hungry, but if humans were already getting used to eating delicious foods cooked by five-star chefs every day, how could they bear to eat cockroaches and mice?! - Joannnichole1mthKommentiert
he is a part of the stars already though
Noticing John's perplexed look, the receptionist spread her hands and said, "Come on, handsome, don't look at me like that. I'm just following the standard registration process." - Joannnichole1mthKommentiert
mix it with fire or ice or thunder
"Storm Blade!" The tornado, carrying a powerful gale, enveloped over twenty demonwolves. - Joannnichole1mthKommentiert
what happened to the storage ring
Then, he pulled out the Withered Staff from his backpack and glanced at his character panel. - Joannnichole1mthAntwortet auf Litago
it's OK. you will discover yourself
I am still not happy to refer to myself as a woman.