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Thanks for the chapter. This fanfic holds so much potential
With a standing army you do not need public consent nor do you even need the public. You already have an army on your payroll. Step 1. You decide to go to war Step 2. You try to get the public on your side Step 3. You do it anyway regardless of the outcome of step 2 Anyway, this is a depressing topic. Do you have any novel recommendations? Strong male lead, no romance, no harem
I think it is adorable you think governments go to war because they care about what the citizens think and feel. If interested, check out the works of these two reputable individuals: noam chomsky chris hedges Ps: I apologize for my earlier comments
answer my questions one at a time. with clear concise answers. you just rambled through your feelings.
do you know why Japan went to war? do you know why the US bombed Japan? do you even know why that bomb was made in the first place? If it's not for power and resources then I will concede.. please do your research. it is not that hard to copy and paste these questions on Google or YouTube.
The system is wasted on this guy. He has zero plans about the future. Just a passive tool.
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The original shisui and itachi trusted him and look at what he turned them into. Minato trusted his only so he died protecting and look at how he raised him.. His 3 students wanted nothing to do with him they all left. 1 rebelled and the other had to be forced back after his death. His own son didn't like his father he left to be a bodyguard for some damyo out there. Kakashi's father was driven to death under his watch. The 3rd is worse than danzo. Danzo is a prostitute you f with protection. The 3rd is the girl you trust, marry and invite into your home for her to poison you and stab you to death while apologizing for killing you.
this novel is romance. I just wish the author could have warned us in advance. Please update the tags.
I think this is it for me. Thanks for the chapters.
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Please share your top 5 reading list. We are dying over here from lack of good recommendations
I will delete my review. I just wanted to give a reason why I was dropping it. felt wrong to just leave. There were so many plot holes but I was so resolved to not critique everything as it happened chapter by chapter. apparently I am a troll when I do it. but off the top of my head: I won't lie, I came for the MC but it is like this novel wasn't even about him. he just didn't care about anything. he was in his own little world.then he goes into hibernation for absolutely no reason besides the story needs him to.. even though he was just born and he has every incentive to stay awake and capitalize. Bottom line is if the MC doesn't even care about his story it makes it hard for us to care. And now we have to read about his dumb, pushover naive son.. please give the gods the reverence they deserve. having a god that sound or behaves like a middle schooler is kinda disappointing.. it was embarrassing the way he behaved around a monkey and a female god that was just born and is way younger than him. way too much happens "off screen" basically it is you telling us something happened.. As for the women.. only TV women are like that (sitcoms, movies) or hateful controlling feminists, or around simpy insecure men. maybe you were looking for toxic abnoxious female characters. Healthy relationships are not like that. and don't forget we are talking about a god and a demigod here dealing with a buncha monkeys.. are you kidding me. A sun god fried his own daughter in his own domain, and it was an accident.. do you realize how ridiculous this sounds. A god, in his own domain.. Lol. he wrote a tiny carry on book about how to build and run a kingdom.. plus an enclopedia of the daily how to "start a fire" all in one tiny book.. I hope you realize how silly this sounds. The ape tribe is just too rushed and feels off. doesn't seem real nor believable. now they are a family and there is aunties.. everything feels contrived. oh yeah not forgetting a female ape decided to talk down on a god.. "what was he doing.. " are you kidding me. it is so weird. she is talking about a god not her brother. there is a pattern to your female characters, they are all the same character. It's like you think they have to put down a man or a male god to show toughness. Anyway.. I will be here all day if I continued on and on. thanks for the read though.
There is a pattern to trashy authors. the way they structure and narrate their stories. After reading hundreds of terrible novels it is very easy to tell. and they don't get better over time, they get worse. It is easier to drop them early.