Just a passerby old ancestor...
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Well i must admit you indeed put a lot of effort in this novel...
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MC template is always one of the extreme of totally OP or totally trash, there's in no in between...so classic. And no matter which extreme, there will always be "plot armor" is the form of cheating abilities or items...
Nice try author...i believe this is your other account making comment
I really hope if i'm in a peril situation and have allies to depend on, you are not one of them. Every seconds matter...
Author, the way you write your novel contradict with your point (MC yapping with his sister) that you write on chapter 1.
On point
My hunch this novel will be dropped by author at around 300ish chapter, the same author other novel, "erotic rpg" for example...
That's it, being dropped again by author, the same as author other unfinished novel. I suggest new potential reader to skip wasting your time reading and waiting for updates. This novel like author other novel will never be completed. Author have no persistence in finishing his novel.
So what rank is MC species? A collosal cosmic entity level? This is why i said the power systems is non-existent