Just_Everything

SCAN what's withs all's the s's's it's really's annoying's

well I've only made it to chapter 6 but non the less I've read the equivalent of 50. great story, very well written. overall it drags out way to much by chapter 6 I've been pumped with so much information that I've forgotten the previous chapter little redundant. I'm not saying it's bad but could use a lot of clean up. regardless the story does keep you interested for some time even tho there isn't a story being told rather overly enhanced descriptions of chats doors food the inner working it's great but can only go so far feels like I'm being told a story by a grandparent reminiscing. so overall if you don't mind overly explained very well written little grammer mistakes ;) seemlessy little story progression ( that's what I'm assuming by the six chapters that the whole story is going to be done this way then this is for you) however even if you want a normal paced story then this is still for you. it's a diamond in the rough. need more reviews of this story an less fanboying. Dammed if that door doesn't have marking at 2 meters high tho. much love apologies for grammar

if elements are only for show then there isn't a point to categorise these things given you could do the same with fire etc magic in and of itself would essentially cancel eachother or am I just not understanding something?

wouldn't it be better to leave the arrow in unless it went straight through his body? pulling it would cause more damage?

mere grade e why the slight arrogance now that he acquired his memories and a few buff skills?

it's pretty smart not to use snipers or guns tho you have to be mathematically inclined for sniping and in a city it would be stupid to use one but again both have drawbacks and considerable amount of risk

I'm not to sure but with all the Maxwell this an that I think they might be the bad people

then why rent it then. it's okay to be poor man

isn't that how it always is

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