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don't know much bout this show but maybe think about just making an au crossover verse with shows like mighty med, lab rats that are connected.
I really like this one very nice start. Feels a little unreasonable, but it has gods. Wonder how he'll interact with the cast and a little more shown of the powerscale compared to original.
Great potential and story only small critique is the passing, but that honestly is really negligible and probably solved with more background. I just don't want you going to high that there's nowhere to go by chap60 or something. I'm probably overthinking. I don't want a good book to burn out or something.
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