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Illona_sama_5462

Illona_sama_5462

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Hi, I'm an author and my books are absolutely great. Join my Discord IllonaSama#1563

2020-07-25 BeigetretenSenegal
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  • Illona_sama_5462
    Illona_sama_5462a year ago
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    Hey there! It's me again. In some of your books, I noticed you talk a lot about Yoongi from BTS right? Not bad! But I also came to give you an advice. For your covers, if you want, if you don't want forget what I will say, for your covers, you can use Canva and create your book cover. I also recommend you to write a synopsis, the thing that is down and at the bottom of the internet page that is used to see your book. It makes it easier to have more viewers and more chances of your book being read. You can also do like you want, you are the one who chooses, and I just give advices. So I hope you have a lot of luck on your journey of writing, bye!

  • Illona_sama_5462
    Illona_sama_5462a year ago
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    Wow! I really love this one. I talks about best friends and imagination. A lot of creativity. You should not discourage yourself, you can get fame and supporters, if you write with your heart and not like a robot, and also if you get knowledge and a lot of hard work. So I'm supporting you to get more viewers.

  • Illona_sama_5462
    Illona_sama_5462a year ago
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    Hey there! I'm here to support your novel. I'm really sorry because before I could see your books in your profile so I was thinking, where are even his books? But here I am after searching your name. I think your work is good, and you can share your love of BTS and make sure the world knows your creativity and hard work. So all the efforts and support you need. Lots of love, from the author!

  • Illona_sama_5462
    Illona_sama_5462a year ago
    Antwortet auf Illona_sama_5462

    Or you can go to my profile!

  • Illona_sama_5462
    Illona_sama_5462a year ago
    Antwortet auf Demon_Dinesh

    It is the Abbreviation of "My adorable Little Wife Sheng Wo"

  • Illona_sama_5462
    Illona_sama_5462a year ago
    Antwortet auf Demon_Dinesh

    It's on webnovel! Click MALWSW

  • Illona_sama_5462
    Illona_sama_5462a year ago
    Antwortet auf Demon_Dinesh

    In fact it is, "My adorable Little Wife Sheng Wo."

  • Illona_sama_5462
    Illona_sama_5462a year ago
    Antwortet auf Demon_Dinesh

    I can reccomend you my book "My little wife Sheng Wo" It is not yet complete, but I'm a bit unsure about jealousy. There is a good protagonist, action, historical and couple as the story goes.

  • Illona_sama_5462
    Illona_sama_5462a year ago
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    Good job!

  • Illona_sama_5462
    Illona_sama_5462a year ago
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    Hello Author, I really like the writing quality, your stability, the development, the world background but maybe, my problem can be on the character, but I give you all the rest of the marks because of your "I'm not a professional, but I have a story to tell." You also said it is your first story, so I would like to encourage you. è_é Please, I hope you always find your inspiration and creativity to strive. As an author myself, I want to learn a bit from other authors and I will like to read your books to learn. Good job and keep going!

Virtual Fantasy World

"Where Am I? What's this world?" the young girl said. "I played all this night, why am I so confused?" "Huh!" Amy looked around. She could see, a futuristic like lobby — where, there were walls: with neon strips of light on them. From the other side, she could see her room. But, when she tried touching the place, where her room was, she received an electric shock. "Ow! " she said, screaming in agony. "This, seriously hurts!" In this futuristic like lobby, there was a central microphone attached to one of the walls. Then, she heard a voice. "You are being launched in, Virtual Adventure Ultimate Defense." The computer programming, announced. The computer programming, is the chief of the lobby and controls, every loading player. Amy, searched what was the best outfit for the game, and for this new adventure. "Welcome! Babyrose54!..." "This is so cringe! I, took the place of my character! " Amy said, as her heartbeat, was getting faster and faster as, the lobby echoed sounds of winds coming from the game entrance. "This has never happened, before. Why am like this?" The computer programming sent her a hologram, in her watch to ask if; she was continuing the game. As her almond eyes crossed the hologram, she suddenly had a lot of hope. "It is too late to retaliate now, I have to find a way to get out. " Amy said, nervous. She confirmed her data to the computer programming, and they proceeded. The metal made machine, configured her information and asked her a few questions. "Do you want, to take on your previous play?" the computer programming, asked. "Yes!" she said. This young gamer girl, is trapped in a virtual world, filled with fantasy and all kind of adventure. Can she get out of this gaming world, far away from hers?

Illona_sama_5462 · Fantasie
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36 Chs

Oh My God! Ultimate Revenge System

Alya is a successful model who has a long-lost lover whom she cherishes from all her heart. She works hard and studies fervently thinking of her lover who will come back one day and ask her in marriage. As a woman of talent and grace, she manages to succeed and get fame through the modeling entertainment world. But when that love comes back and becomes CEO he says having long lost ever since any sort of emotion for her and asks not to see her once again in his life. Heartbroken she faints and dies wishing she never met him. But well seen and lucky as she was, she reincarnated into a newbie model from the company of her lover. Will succeed in getting her revenge and take all those awaiting and wasted years? The image is not mine. Here is the link: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/418131146638384944/.

Illona_sama_5462 · Urban
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10 Chs