Charles_Warriors

Transferred from Fairy Tail? Dude this story is getting worse and worse, in the first chapters it seems that Natsu was reincarnated in the world of MHA and has no memories of his past life, in later chapters you change this and then show that Natsu was transported to the world of MHA by some strange force and now everyone knows Fairy Tail as if he was present in the world of MHA and even make reference that he was transferred, dude if you are using chatgpt at least try to follow the same plot line.

True, they are enemies but they have also been summoned by a forbidden jutsu by someone who is also their enemy (Orochimaru) and I want to believe that they would have some pride and not want to be used as mere pawns considering they were leaders of their respective villages in the past. Also you think a little bit maybe most of them hated Konoha when they were alive but the situation is different none of the previous kages are idiots if they go and destroy Konoha Orochimaru wins what awaits them in the future? Obviously Orochimaru will continue to use them for his own purposes and nothing assures the revived ones that Orochimaru won't use them against their own villages in the future.

Unless all the summoned Kage Orochimaru has reduced their power to the level of a joinin or lower I don't understand how he can control so many, considering that he must be careful with tobirama being the creator of the jutsu he may find opportunity to free himself,

This is a complete plagiarism the original story is called: An Iron Resolve from ao3 made by the author CambrianBeckett, he doesn't even bother to change the title of the chapters.

You talk as if you were really writing this story, because so far I only see a plagiarism of the story: An Iron Resolve from ao3 by the author CambrianBeckett. If you are going to make your own version at least mention where your inspiration comes from.

In conclusion bra is a fusion of Gohan and Broly, how about if you decide to follow canon, a super bra from your story would defeat all the gods of destruction and Zeno Sama with only 5 years, honestly it seems you read too much dragon ball multiverse and fell in love with universe 16 bra ( who is incredibly strong but her father is the fusion of Goku and Vegeta) I'm not saying bra can't be strong, but you're over inflating her too much

Yes it is unfortunate, I was hoping the author would change that part because if the MC has such strong and rare fruits like Enel, aramaki and Sengoku devil fruit it wouldn't be weird if he could also have Magellan fruit which in my opinion is the best fruit for hanzo since his fighting style focuses a lot on poisoning his opponents.

Did you give hanzo the Doku Doku Fruit that Magellan has? To be honest it's the only devil fruit that hanzo would have 100% compatibility with, considering that hanzo altered his body by adding several venom sacs and glands, in other words in terms of venom hanzo will outperform Magellan by far if you give him that fruit.

I was trying to say that shinso because of what he experienced at the sports festival and after his battle with Izuku made him grow up and put aside that low self-esteem with his gift and learned to harness it and improve, potentially making him the best underground hero by far surpassing aizawa. But the shinso in your story is still far behind even though you made him enter the hero class storyline wise he is still stuck in the same mindset of feeling inferior because of his quirk and in canon he overcame that feeling by being able to enter the hero class on his own merit by training with aizawa. Omitting the above your story is amazing, I like how you have handled Garp's character and how you have developed the story, there are a few small errors in the plot but that doesn't detract from your story at all.

This answer raises a question in my mind, how long do you plan to make the story? Because if you omit the recommendation test then it would cause some conflict with the character Inasa Yoarashi which I consider to possess some of the strongest quirks literally can control the wind an incredible potential that was not properly harnessed.