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also develop the relationships slowly, if your planning to go to other worlds,don't label the relationship , just accept that they have feelings for each other and are going through the 'realization phase'?? so that would be an optimal time for world traveling, you can choose to take the girl with you for relationship progression or you can leave the girl and not feel guilty for leaving her because you are not sure of your feelings....? ...
As for the Mt.Lady situation, I mean it's your story, you are the author so it's your decision.honestly the *** friend idea isn't that bad , but I don't think the personality of the MC could mesh well with it but if you are confident you can do it, you should.i have seen the friends with benefits plot inside some stories and some did good , while others just went from 0-100 real fast, like went from strangers to 'I love you'in the span of 10 seconds which is a big no-no.but please do keep mind that even if it's a friends with benefits kind of deal, some feelings may catch on for noth parties, also by chance if you choose to end it don't put the woman in a relationship with another person immediately after the breakup...pls. but again your story...im just suggesting.
The premise is awesome and all but God,the relationship progression?it went from 0-100 real fast.like they've barely known each other for a day and boom the i love you came out of nowhere...like what?....and the mc is like giving off Pervy bakugou vibes...''hmmm...jiro looked good, I just ''might" consider "adding"her to my harem.........I mean no offence ,your creativity is good but ...uuh relationship -wise?slow down a little....yeah?
I'm not trying to justify the authors decision or anything but I think what he's trying to convey is that both Reima and Citi would have liked to start a relationship with Quelaag ..and the others,with how they're relationship with Fleur ended,they were scared to take the first step? With Quelaag pushing both of them into it,the decision was taken away from they're hands and hence they chose to go along with it. I propose a chapter detailing reimas pov on this?
I don't mind the mc experimenting...what I do have a problem is the lack of attachment that he has to his bed buddy...it's a little off putting....lorelai isn't a one night stand....and it is natural to have an attachment after years of being together as friends with benefits..but ....he doesn't care for it....that's all I'm saying.....
yes....yes I am.......
While console commands are op,I don't want to make him too op,that's why I made the help command ineffective....mostly I'm thinking the ending to be something like thanos showing up with an infinity gauntlet and mc be like you have an infinity gauntlet?I have an infinity gauntlet.you know what?everybody gets an infinity gauntlet......jk