hado_90

there are some grammar mistakes in the first few chapters, but overall, it has potential. I especially like the fact that the main character didn't stick with the winchesters.

i think "offspring" refers to lexcorp.

i find a few things i don't like:the mc has a system but hasn't used it in years.He could have used it to make his business bigger, get stronger or recruit more subordinates. Dumbledore tried to kill the mc's child and later used them as pawns but the guy just brushed off.the other obviously made the protagonist too strong and the system too op and didn't know how to develop the story the mc became an indecisive fool

knowing zoro always gets lost it isn't surprising that sanji has better observation haki

raw: 开局选黑胡子，只有我懂伟大航路

Six styles

isn't he 14?

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Trash! The first few chapters are good. Although, not mind-blowing but good. However, it got bad very fast. The author decided to out the mc as a transmigrator in a very foolish way and he also ntr the mc which quite disgusting in my opinion