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Honestly, it would be better for Damon to crush the top ten ranked in Middleweights or half of them. This would be better for him in terms of Legacy, increasing his fame, and increasing the number of his victories . Damon fights more than any fighter and is not afraid to face anyone. This alone makes him a fan favorite fighter. Like Alex pereira
I meant the ranking Jack Hermansson is ranked #12
How much is the Damon discount rating number?
Damon is weak against Takedowns All his time training for his wrestler (and dozens of tedious chapters about his training) were of no use. Holland easily brought him down. Please writer, we do not want filler chapters. Focus on the fighting If you want to write filler chapters, make them two chapters at most Filler chapters kill the fun of reading, so try not to write too many of them
He doesn't have to share anything with Paul Damon is the main character. We don't want the empire to be divided with Paul. This is very boring. It's the same book. We don't want anything about Paul. This is Damon's story, not Paul. If Paul became emperor then. There is no benefit from Damon's presence and his useless power, and his presence in a story, as I said, will be just a useless side character. Man you should have killed Paul he ruined the whole plot two emperors is stupid In general, it's your story, do what you want
It's stupid to make Paul rule Arkes I don't know what Damon's benefit is in this story. If Paul is still here, the Fermin are not going to follow Damon now. They have become Paul's men . How will Damon become emperor if all of Arcis' power is in Paul's hands now? Damon has no use in the story. Paul is still the hero of the story. He is the one who will burn the galaxy again in his holy war. I don't know yet how you will make Paul follow Damon, since Paul has the power of Arcis and the loyalty of all the Fermen people behind him, as well as the army of House Atreditus. And Damon has nothing. I don't know who the hero of the story is now. It seems that Paul, even in this story, is an MC, and Damon is just a stupid side character who has no benefit except to support the hero of the original story. Overall, I like your story, but you need to work a little on the plot
Filler chapters 😩
bro 😮💨 We want chapters on fighting Please, we don't want many filler chapters
I hope each chapter tells us the number of Damon fights and his rating