no what I hate even more is the fact that he is complaining while a heroine is right next to him. he hasn't got one win in this story and it is too much pain to get through to care if he does get one further in. I'm done. dropped.

from what I have read, this seems like a good story. the beginning is a bit cliché, but it is a cool setting with unique characters and a interesting plot so far.

:l very weak legal case but I'll let it slide. I don't blame ya that much, most people don't know how there laws work and this is a story. Long story short, a decent public defender could get you out of this case unless you get a reallllly bad jury.

I love goh, I was kinda disappointed at the end but the whole story was amazing. fun fact, I have read goh so much that when crunchyroll signed with them. thw author went back and changed old chapters. not major but it undermined Jin mori as "the fool". I love the concept of mori being the fool because it perfectly works with his personality and actions, then the author changed it and made it so that its hard see that perspective :(

*much

I love the idea of "the fool" it can symbolize so uch and mean so much more. one of my favorite Mangas had a man that perfectly represented "the fool" in the story, sadly the author went back and changed it but I won't forget.

I 100% think she would go to slytherin based off of her personality.

mostly NVIDIA I think.

this will seem like heavy criticism so i will start with this statement first. I like the story so far. the idea of the boss being able to put stakes up for grim is cool. I love how you set everything up. but execution, sucked. the fight was kinda anticlimactic in my opinion, and you kinda just threw away the fight for flashbacks to memories. for example, you could have had grim still lose but have the boss backed into a corner as his henchmen fall asleep, when he uses the power of this mysterious sword to stab his henchmen to give him power and fight against grim. fight happens. traumatic kid tries to double team fight the boss but dies and grim ends up here. but the difference is, you added more detail to the fight and got creative. your jump to his loss nearly disregarded the whole sleeping gas and kid. side note: when making a villain you want the audience to hate, make sure the audience hates the villain, and not the story.

I find your opinion flawed, the proposed idea is to crime lords(and villians i guess). people who value their own image and loyalty. if they don't go through with the deal, they will have big targets on there own backs. also, they are not forced to participate, so saying it's unfair doesn't seem right in a scenario where you know your enemy and choose to back out.

yeah, names is a big issue I'm this translation

let's hope he is not the fastest man alive.

didn't it just Say a few sentences back that he has no friends?

I mean, he's not wrong.

I dont know why, but the author, and evidently the audience as well, forgot what the serum did. It was originally treatment for a rare genetic disease, not a magic health potion. you don't inject someone with a flu vaccine if they are bleeding out.

my theory is a time loop. past Arthur saved the wolf then went into the alternate timeline. this time line is the future where Kira has already grown and evolved. after returning from the timeline, Arthur will help Kira grow because of the connection, making him strong enough to help in the timeliness for past Arthur.

poor guy

but*

I really think he should have stayed in the forest longer, it was a challenge for the mc and a chance for growth both strength wise and emotionally. bur he struggled one day and was promptly thrown back into his old life. I did enjoy the fact that he reflected on it but it doesn't work if he was there one night.

"he's a good guy, trust me I did a vibe check"