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There are some minor writing and grammar issues, but the story is very interesting and the setting and concept is unique. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes.

Thanks! Yes, decided to rewrite everything. No major story changes, but fixed a bunch of issues and the magic system and story get a little deeper.

Interesting **** drama about an emotionally isolated boy, which is quite different from the other stories on this site. No crazy stuff, just a nice story about high school life.

This is an 18+ story that does the 18+ stuff a lot more tastefully than other stories on this site, and it is done from the woman's point of view. If that's your jam, then be sure to check this out.

You should totally read this novel. It might take a few chapters, but soon you'll be hooked. You can trust me on this, I happen to be an expert on the matter. ;P (jokes aside, thanks for reading!)

Eleanor is definitely a protagonist to root for. This along with the interesting setting of the world and her potential love interest(s) makes for a great read. Looking forward to what happens next!

The author has some truly beautiful prose at times. The prologue starts with a beautiful analogy that sets the tone before we are introduced to the characters. The story is fascinating and tragic and takes a while to build up. It's currently on hiatus, and I'm looking forward to when it returns. (P.S. I love that bird.)

This story is a winner. If the author continues with it, I fully expect it to become a top ranked story on WebNovel.com. Took only 3 chapters to get me totally hooked. The MC is relatable and her reactions are quite realistic considering all the crazy things that start happening to her. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Engaging story although there aren't that many chapters out yet. MC is a little naive but has a unique personality. Looking forward to learning more about the interesting world where the story takes place.