I’ve read ur novel and I could say it’s pretty good for new readers. The only bad side of this novel is that: first, the words per chapter are pretty short. second, there is grammar needed to be proofread and revise. thirdly, there is no third. The good side of this novel is that: the story is good. the world is unique. I’m pretty sure everyone likes to read a new, unfolding world to be explored. Overall, I'd say I recommend this to the people who are looking for unique world backgrounds.

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Thank you for the encouragement. I’ll take note of my drawbacks and improve for the better. 😇

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