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But Aurthor sama if that is the case why did DYX in XRQ's first life say that he ressembles the man she loved dearly?
So we already know that there are two simultaneous lifetimes at play, the original book plot which is Xu Ruiquan's first life and his second life. In XRQ's first life DYX was married to TZZ who was having an affair with JLY, who later became the Empress, but towards the end of her life, she already knew of Captain Yu, so most probably the switch between souls happened after the marriage happened, whoch led to her living seperately from TZZ and then saving XRQ who looked like Captain Yu. But here is what I do not understand, JLY, the girl who became the Empress, how did she becoem the Empress and why is she choosing between the Protagonist amd XRQ?
It started great and delivered on most aspects such as character development and exciting face slapping scenario, but there were visible plot holes, like the first Variety show that the protagonist attended stopped due to the accident but, Yu Han helps the dorector reappeal to the government for reinstatement, and promises to participate again with Ji Jun, but there was no mention of this. Just like Li Wei was not mentioned after the first variety show and the Yu family made no presence known. The ending was made in a hurry, which is my biggest pain point.
This game is another level Boss! It comes with an accompaniment to follow the player's mood.
Exactly, in real life, truck kun is only responsible for pain, destruction and ruined lifes. So truck Kun do not come!
Dies she look like the third rated person, who stole her luck? No, our SFQ is the most beautiful and unique, keep your third rate person away.
SFQ is glowing with luck.
I think, it is because SFQ, took away the Captain Jiang Zhou from the Ji family. As a reader it is quiet clear that the Ji family of Sijiu with that sickly lady Ji at the center has taken SFQ's luck, otherwise how could the sickly miss survive till now. As for the prophetic dreams that SFQ should have, is also with that sick Ji miss, or else how had she made the Myraid thousand muntains embroidery right after SFQ made it and made it like it was copied but without any emotions.
Is she not supposed to have only one holiday? She is an intern working as a temp. employee who serves out lunch. Saturday is a working day for employees.
Currently, at Chapter 50, 3/4 through the first volume. To the new readers, here is what to expect. This is a book that does a major degree in foreshadowing. Those who do not like it, be warned. At first, the foreshadowing is a bit meh, but later on you can see that the author is in their element, you will actually start thinking along with them and look forward to it. You will just have to wait the meh and uncertain part through, it is just the first 10 or so chapter, where it is uncertain, how the character's are coming to conclusions and where in the world they are, but the smoke starts settling down after 10 or so chapter. Then you get the Protagonist Heather, starting to see the world through a different and much more mature prespective. The book has an epic take on rebirth, and the consequences it has on a person and their psychology, it does not brush away the scars of the protagonist but shows how they are dealing with it. That is why on the scope of Character building it is OP. The story development thpugh slow is not boring. It is also slow, because it show an amzing characterstic of the protagonist, 'time bidding' her favourite hobby. Throughout, the slow pace, you get the clues to solve the greater mystery and see the final act coming together in bits and pieces. I will update more, after I have read further. But otherwise, the book is worth a read. Especially, for those who like a strong and sure FL, who is a toch dramatic and not altogether cold and dispassionate.
Aurthor Sama! Hi!😄 I am glad you noticed my comment.☺ On a much more serious note, can you tell me how you got so good at writing. I mean I am at chapter 50 right now, and your foreshadowing about the third party behind Amanda, the photographs and the whisper before her coma, is amazing, totally another level. Still don't like Cyrus though. I am waiting for the third 'child' under Papa Adam and Mama Elie, or maybe that guy who was there for her funeral.
I am happy that you noticed! But on a much serious note, your writing skill is increasing with leaps and bound that I am speechless. The foreshadowing done during her coma and the photographs, is so good! Chef's kiss! I am on Chapter 50 now, and leaving a review. I still do not like Cyrus, although it seems he has lost memory or has been brainwashed...but, nope, still don't like him!
And you still pffended by being called a mama's boy?
Don't make him the male lead, especially after you had him have three kids with Susan. No hate on Susan though, since I don't know her character, but she did cheat with Cyrus during their marriage. But, really you are forcefully making him the male lead right now.
Look author sama, foreshadowing is good but using, 'or something' and 'that something' a lot of time is not. It makes your story line seem half assed. Do a better job at foreshadowing, by showing it through suddent changes in emotions on certain topics, rather than just adding, 'something'. I get it you are desperatly trying yo keep Cyrus from looking like the bad guy, but that can not be done. He neglected her, even if it was in hatred, and hurt her. For that she atleast deserves a grovel since she already had some positive history with him, in regards to the promise and him not knowing who she truly was.
Why am I suddenly so glad? IIts good to have his worthless feelings killed in the cradle.
Doctor: The injury could either lead to death or just cripled limbs and a lifebound in wheel chair. It could either be good or bad.....
She is shocked now? Don't you think it is quite late Ella fella for you to be shocked? Slow on the uptake much?
So, she was awale but refused to wake up all the while being conscious and congniziant of the change of her surroundings? Yeah sure.
SFW: Yeah, I am openly mocking you now. What can you do? HUH?!?