Boqn_Ishtev

its good just dont make it harem make it more slice of life thinky with some fighting au you can make crossover with underworld too

keep it up its good i rly like it and dont drop it

super good keep them coming ill be waiting for my chapter for the rewiew

no keep them coming

he die ? why is he here?

ok i was ok with the spells name but that is gg im out hope someone remake this

are you going to up more ?

pretty good book for now but you can make it more of a info giving for puppet idents and marvel scenes

Its a good story for now keep it on but can you reveal him sooner and change this gardian name to someting else tnx 5 star

the ffc is good i like it keep going man