Aphrodisia_Ravinia

How is Marlo so worried about reputation and image, if his sons mother is a stripper/prostitute??

It's supposed to say Beta Alissa not Adira

I really like your story, but there's quite a lot of wrong name usage or incorrect words.

No problem, you're welcome!!

I agree with all the others. This has been going on for far too long, with the villain Susan and nobody else noticing that she's fixated on attacking Keira and causing discord amongst the family. Although your paragraphs have gotten a bit longer, they are still just paragraphs, not chapters, and we are paying to read chapters. You also continue to make us wait for, for these short paragraphs, just to disappoint us with useless dribble and bird walking around the actual story line or repeating the same lines over and over again. Can you "Please" get it together and get it written correctly!! Writing out your story lines and read over them a few times, before you add them to your actual store. It would greatly help you to understand what you have written and where you should go with your story. Some Bird walking is fine, but it should be short and used as filler information for the story line. Please work harder to be a better writer!

This story just keeps going down hill, more and more. Making everyone look so stupid and naive all the time. How are they supposed to be so smart, yet you turn around and portray them as super ignorant and gullible. The one thing a super rich person, who runs a highly established business is not, is gullible.

Nara is Barbara

Mr. Yan

Ohh WoW, this guy is such a greedy man. It's so horrible, I just can't believe the greed in some people.

Yeah, someone else gave me the sad news... I appreciate your letting me know that, though! I was hoping to read the last of this story on Kindle, though. 😢🫣😭