atomic_potato

So far, the story is very good! Congratulations! I'll read the remaining chapters, then when I have time, I'll do a nice review, because this story deserves it.

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Cap -56- The story is light, good to read, has great characters and don t have repetitive situations, I really recommend it. But I also notice that the author sometimes exaggerates in the description of scenarios and situations (he looks like an old man telling a story... he rambles!) ---------------- Author, me too I would recommend changing the cover, because despite being beautiful and well made, it gives us the idea of ​​a natural medicine book, not a fantasy book (I don't say this as a review, just because I like the novel and think it has content enough to become popular)

I read up to chapter 75, the book is fun and there's a silly comedy that's really cool to read. The downside for me is the large amount of quantities. Reading the fight narrative, is often boring. Another bad point to highlight are chapters 59 and 60, they are terrible, honestly they don't make any sense, but other than that, the story is cool.

I only paid attention to the dialogue of the gods, for the rest, I did a superficial reading... narration of fights is a drag.

The previous two chapters were bad, make little sense... a complete mess. But this one was really good, this idea of ​​​​communicating with the mother through letters was really cool!