interesting start, a few mistakes other than that good job

dym by that?????

dude what's your name on discord???

nth much been a while bro

weak*

I mean in every cultivation world the week gets stepped on

You do know I read your other story?

The man has returned welcome back bro!

your comment made my day😂

it's lit no Travis Scott, the story is awesome I can't lie, like bro u doing a good job at this point fam just keep doing you Happy New Year my guy, hope you don't run out of ideas.

Bro when are you going to turn Axel into a web novel and bring it to life?

Should have called it shonen skip...but Shonen Crouch is kool lol

thanks bro😭 it means a lot!!!!

I love this book reason it's different from anything that I've read. The plot is just amazing, the main protagonist gives me that antihero vibes he so kool the world-building, and the pacing is just on point I'm definitely gonna keep reading this keep up the good work my fellow writer.

In the words of Travis Scott "It's lit!" the plot is kool and simple, the pacing and world development is just right. The writing quality is great I don't see anything wrong with it for the stability of updates idk. But nice work bro/sis this can definitely be a hit.

Thank you, my friend I'll work on that, and trust me, my head isn't a nice place.

Shits finna get real

fantastic indeed

This is in fact an awesome book, the plot and the characters are amazing, I love the bond that Micheal and Bells have, the writing is good you manage to capture my interest the only problem were some grammatical errors but besides that it was great. The pacing of the book is just right and I'll definitely keep reading this book. Oh for the grammatical error you can download Grammarly or just the plug in it will help you identify the errors while you write and also grade your writing. Good luck to you my fellow author I'm digging this book.