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These last three paragraphs are completely redundant
Wasn't it Snargaluff last chapter?
It should be Flamel instead of Grindelwald
In my humble opinion Fiendfyre is many times more dangerous than any of the Unforgivables. The terrible three are all single target spells thar require line of sight. Ff on the other hand is an AoE attack that has a tendency to go out of control and feeds on magic.
This would be embarrassing for anyone not jut dimension hoppers
This should be impossible as it is mandatory to take at least 2 electives. 3 are recommended. More than that requires a time turner.
2 typos here
This paragraph is far too long. It should be split into three or four paragraphs at least to become more readable.
there is a t missing
I think writing letters was still fairly common in the early nineties.
If you already provide a number range don't add 'nearly' as well as it doesn't make sense and breaks the flow of the sentence.