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And seriously taking the tesseract in his hand is normal like all the people there can take it and also is true in all of marvel knowing thing is not a big deal but here it the debut were they know of alien so it a bid deal
1 not having in history in this world is alarming for the shield 2 knowing thing he shouldn’t know is a big deal for the shield because it there secret 3 they know because there is cameras all over the city and even in the mcu they is the scene were the shield monitor the city so they know
He don’t have ID in the world 1 He know thing in domaine of technology that not anyone can have like the tesseract 2 And the time he use probability to the impossible 3
Tier 9
Her and it qiu yi meng who met yang tian at the celebration of the new head of the Yang family
Can you please just stick to one host*
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You can use : when they speak so it can be better Like Yang Kai : hello Yang tai : hello It can be easier for readers to understand the flow of the story When you have people in your story screaming you don’t have to say it if you the writing like this : I DON’T WANT . You don’t to have say he screaming and lastly plis use chat gpt for grammar so it can be easier for you and use to understand and you can say to him to just help you whith the grammar and not change anything else