DHillion

I'm thinking keyboard

it disappeared

I can only imagine just how far Lucavion takes the shaming!

Urla feels kinda odd, she seems there but not there at the same time. I'm curious to see how the author is going to develop her further.

A repeat

Rest's gender got flipped.

Author there needs to be distinction between conversations and inner thoughts.

Depends on your country of origin.

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An excellent start to what I think is a very promising story and look forward to more updates to come.