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Amarrida

Amarrida

Lv15

I'm a caged dreamer/adventurer with four sons.

2020-02-25 BeigetretenUnited States
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  • Amarrida
    Amarridaa year ago
    Verschickt

    Why is it over so quickly?!?! Such a good, sweet story. I liked that although the ending was seemingly rushed, the author did take the time to develop it at least a bit more than those novels tthat just end abruptly. Anyway, the leads are sweet but I wished there was more romance between them, but I understand that the time and setting didn’t allow for too much of that. Other than that, I couldn’t put it down! Read it!

  • Amarrida
    Amarrida2 years ago
    Verschickt

    What a wonderful and sweet story. Nice plot line too. Yes, at chapter 40, the translation quality is pretty bad, but not so bad that you can’t figure it out. I loved how the main leads were very attentive and loving to one another, and didn’t let misunderstandings get in their way. It’s truly a sweet story.

  • Amarrida
    Amarrida2 years ago
    Verschickt

    Only 80 chapters but every part pulls you in. The character development and personalities were depicted clearly and were well defined. Excellent writing quality and storytelling. Grammar fixing and some editing needed. Wished there was more and hadn’t ended so quickly. Ah! So addictive! 😊

  • Amarrida
    Amarrida2 years ago
    Verschickt

    Weird but good. I wished there was more to ending though. Sometimes, I wanted to smack both of the leads. Not my favorite story but it kept me interested enough to finish it.

  • Amarrida
    Amarrida2 years ago
    Verschickt

    Overall, it’s cute story but the ending was disappointing. It was obviously a rushed ending. This story had so much potential, but sadly, it abruptly ended with too few details, leaving me unsatisfied. 😢

  • Amarrida
    Amarrida2 years ago
    Antwortet auf Kayra_Maheshwari

    Yes, it’s completed! 😊

  • Amarrida
    Amarrida2 years ago
    Kommentiert

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

  • Amarrida
    Amarrida2 years ago
    Verschickt

    Such a good story! It was well-paced and flowed perfectly. The relationship between the leads was sweet, but realistic. The inclusion of dragons was incorporated very well too. A++++++++++++ author! Another great work! ❤️❤️❤️

  • Amarrida
    Amarrida2 years ago
    Verschickt

    Well, hot damn, that was spicy! 🌶 I’ve never seen such an explicit comic on here. The graphics were well done and the story progressed well. Although, for me, it ended too fast. I wanted more!

  • Amarrida
    Amarrida2 years ago
    Verschickt

    Pretty much a copycat of “Ma’am You’ve Been Uncovered,” but not even a good copycat! Many background details are skipped over or missing. Also, the story-telling is just portly executed. However, the worst part of it all is the extremely obvious, but poorly executed, story-line. It’s too aggravating to read. Dropped it.