Kpnovellover

Hi, just one suggestion. instead of listing slime multiple times just put slime (18). same for other summons as well

quick updates please. waiting 15 days for an update breaks the flow

this story is awesome!!!!!!

Simon?

it seems there's a typo in this paragraph

before it was 2 minutes right ?

more chapters please

first of all,I'm no expert.this is just my opinion as a reader.author you are doing a good job writing the scene.but you are dragging this scene across multiple chapters.your description of the situation paints a vivid picture.but i think you should add some sounds as well.like moaning sounds or something.because after a while just readers will lose interest in it.

can you add more details in the character list?atleast add affiliations. It's hard to keep track.and maybe something like a relationship status at least?ex. lover, friend, enemy, etc.

if this is the way the story will keep going, then the author should put the ntr tag.