Roseta_Azmair

That's normal tbh, everyone says one thing, then does another, it's why the saying "Actions speak louder than words" is a thing because your actions tell you who you are, because anyone can say one thing, but their actions will always betray them.

That's how I have been reading this story, I never had Shirou in my mind, but a oc with the name of shirou

Just stating a opinion in that world is enough for a lot of people to kill your entire family line.

Love the premises, but the (*terrified*) type parts ruin the immersion I have as I read and throw me off, You explain well with what is happening.

+1

Who would of thought, Disappointing. Like I knew KNEW this was gonna happen as soon as she showed up, but I still hoped I guess.

I'm very positive a 12 year old smoker did not have his df at that point in time >.>

Just gonna use this to continue instead of "Magical potential" like ugh, people really don't like researching basic facts.

The writing quality is bad but not unreadable 2/5, the updating stability is average 3/5, story development is average 3/5, character design is Bad 1/5, world background is average 3/5.

She's a hot women, why not? you should know by now how people think xD