If guns are too noisy, why not something quieter, but still long range, like bows or crossbows?

Pretty sure this blush is from embarrassment

Yeah, he can leave those women for his subordinates

Better than the mc letting them try to kill then a second time.

I'm really enjoying the novel so far, thanks so much for writing it!

At this point I doubt I'll believe she's on the mcs side unless she chooses to kill Daniel, someone who exists as his kryptonite.

You could always write it in third person and then edit it to be first person afterwards

As well as neutral ones. This is poorly phrased to be honest.

It may be Dad now, but give a bit and it'll change into Daddy, I'm sure ;)

So, the mc is do evil not even his harem members are safe from him? Not gonna lie, I'm not sure how I'm gonna handle that moving forward.

Even though that makes perfect sense, I'm doubting that's why the constellation responds like that.

I think it's a little of both, to be honest, but probably more manipulation if I had to choose one.

Cool image, definitely not stealing it for myself, no siree

Pretty sure it doesn't actually work that way, but I'll allow it based upon it being cool and something that would work in a video game or action movie.

Oddly enough I find this one far easier to believe since it requires not only that the user has a skill, but that the user could kill monsters this quickly and chose to upgrade that skill to maximum level. That's a lot of conditions to fulfill.

I'm having a hard time believing the mc was the first person to kill a monster in the entire world. He went up to the roof, inspected the area, went back to ground level, and only then did he kill one. That's a lot of time that elapsed that someone else could have killed one during. If it said he was the first in the city or local region or something else to that effect, I'd find it a lot more believable simply because the chance of someone being in a good position to kill a monster is a lot lower in a smaller area.

She passed out right after using it, though, so she would have been vulnerable afterward and could have been easily killed if there wasn't someone around to protect her. Honestly, it was probably smart for her not to use it right then given the situation.

I hope he treats his loyal harem members right at the very least.

"We can't be seen here" the mc says, followed by him immediately grabbing everyone's attention so everyone knows he's there 🤣

I'll be honest, I'm having a hard time emotionally connecting with the mc enough to root for him with the way he killed every woman in his harem, despite them being loving and loyal. I know villains do evil things, but there's got to some kind of limit, or they don't even seem human anymore.