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Just Want to say, this is one of the best Fanfics I have read for a while. OP Luffy early game? sign me up!!! May you continue on your journey of writing good fanfic

Storytelling felt more like Marvel fanfic than dragon ball fanfic. which is very off-putting Otherwise it is somewhat a good read (bearable)

Truly, this novel that has come into my possession is amongst the greatest literary works that I have had the pleasure of perusing in a considerable span of time. The comedy is masterfully crafted, the romance is tenderly depicted, and the story as a whole is of the highest caliber. It is with great conviction that I endorse this novel to any and all who may come across it.

First and foremost, the plot was riddled with repetition. It felt like I was reading the same scenes over and over again, with only minor variations to the dialogue or setting. As a result, the story failed to maintain my interest, and I found myself skimming through pages just to get to something new. Another major issue was the lack of creativity in the writing. The author relied heavily on tired tropes and clichés, and the characters felt flat and uninspired. It was particularly frustrating to see the main protagonist and heroine constantly referred to as "handsome" and "beautiful" without any real depth or nuance to their personalities. But perhaps the most frustrating aspect of the book was the confusing world development. The author seemed to have a lot of interesting ideas, but failed to fully flesh them out or connect them in a meaningful way. As a result, I found myself struggling to keep track of the various factions and their motivations, and ultimately felt disconnected from the story as a whole. All in all, while the book had its moments, the issues with plot repetition, lack of creativity, character design, and world development left me feeling disappointed and unsatisfied. I wouldn't recommend this book to others, and can only hope that the author will take these criticisms to heart in their future writing.

Take a break my friend and have a nice break

The story is so funny it makes me laugh silly.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

This is one of the best fanfiction stories out there. Despite the plot hole, the rush ending and so on, the story still delivers enough entertainment for the reader. So 4.6 from me.

I like this story. While the plot is a very cliche for some people, I find it very interesting. The MC is very shameless(like most Chinese novels). The author also adds "science" albeit just a for comedy purpose.

let's do this

I keep forgetting that this is DXD fanfic lol 😆~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~